Kanye to The banner

1 - 2 of 2 Posts

·
Premium Member
Joined
·
5,022 Posts
Discussion Starter #1
Just did a very short freestyle for this guy's beat, but Im not a fan of it. something makes me feel like its crap

is it bland? please confirm whether or not im just insecure lol, the delivery could have been way better but I

was going for a calm, smooth rap


please and thanks! also, follow me @ soundcloud.com/arimusiq and ill follow back

and if you liked the guy's beat, here's more soundcloud.com/victor-hernandez-prodctions
 

·
Registered
Joined
·
2,210 Posts
ariel said:
Just did a very short freestyle for this guy's beat, but Im not a fan of it. something makes me feel like its crap

is it bland? please confirm whether or not im just insecure lol, the delivery could have been way better but I

was going for a calm, smooth rap


please and thanks! also, follow me @ soundcloud.com/arimusiq and ill follow back

and if you liked the guy's beat, here's more soundcloud.com/victor-hernandez-prodctions
There's potentional. Focus on getting more comfortable rapping and flowing, it was choppy. But I liked where you switched it up to the singing type thing I thought that was original. Keep it up

Here's my latest song:

https://soundcloud.com/knellz%2Fknellz-no-handle
 
1 - 2 of 2 Posts
Top