yo how is my first attempt at rapping doe ?

https://soundcloud.com/emerald-ruins%2Ffirst-attempt-at-rapping-tbh
recorded with a web cam mic so sorry bout the shitty quality tbh, either way i know its pretty wack

beat produced by me, pm a ***** if u lookin for hot beats tbh

m 15 so dont take my lyrics seriously, i was just doing this for fun i dont shoot people tbh
na but really doe, constructive criticism plz i wanna b better dan kendrick lamar aka 2pac dad

edit: if it helps i put the lyrics in the description cuz i know sometimes its hard to make out wat im sayin at times tbh

http://soundcloud.com/emerald-ruins/first-attempt-at-rapping-tbh