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yo how is my first attempt at rapping doe ?

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recorded with a web cam mic so sorry bout the shitty quality tbh, either way i know its pretty wack

beat produced by me, pm a ***** if u lookin for hot beats tbh :tash:

m 15 so dont take my lyrics seriously, i was just doing this for fun i dont shoot people tbh
but i do murder ****** :twisted:

na but really doe, constructive criticism plz i wanna b better dan kendrick lamar aka 2pac dad

edit: if it helps i put the lyrics in the description cuz i know sometimes its hard to make out wat im sayin at times tbh

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work on dat flow boiii. and obviously get a better mic. and just write alot!
TheCrimsonKing said:
What are some flow 'exercises' you guys would suggest, not just for OP but any young rapper? Just write a ton?
rap you're favorite songs alot i guess. when you write say it outloud alot too.
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