yo how is my first attempt at rapping doe ?
recorded with a web cam mic so sorry bout the shitty quality tbh, either way i know its pretty wack
beat produced by me, pm a ***** if u lookin for hot beats tbh
m 15 so dont take my lyrics seriously, i was just doing this for fun i dont shoot people tbh
but i do murder ****** 
na but really doe, constructive criticism plz i wanna b better dan kendrick lamar aka 2pac dad
edit: if it helps i put the lyrics in the description cuz i know sometimes its hard to make out wat im sayin at times tbh
http://soundcloud.com/emerald-ruins/first-attempt-at-rapping-tbh
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dam with all this advice ill improve in no time !
work on dat flow boiii. and obviously get a better mic. and just write alot!
dat pitch down<<
flow needs work too tbh
flow needs work too tbh
Gabrielreyes14 said:
got yall ! thanks tbh !NXGGVBXTCH said:
for that real southern feel cuz i havent gotten my big black man voice yet tbhNXGGVBXTCH said:
Haha
EmeraldRuins said:i havent gotten my big black man voice yet tbh
are black? 
idk why i pictured you as white lmao
idk why i pictured you as white lmao
EmeraldRuins said:got yall ! thanks tbh !
for that real southern feel cuz i havent gotten my big black man voice yet tbh
white boys dont get da bitches wet da way da homie emerald does
so ya im not white
so ya im not white
NXGGVBXTCH said:are black?
EmeraldRuins said:white boys dont get da bitches wet da way da homie emerald does
so ya im not white
As a proud member of Texas, I disapprove of this attempt at southern rap.
Shahi Stan said:
What are some flow 'exercises' you guys would suggest, not just for OP but any young rapper? Just write a ton?
rap you're favorite songs alot i guess. when you write say it outloud alot too.
TheCrimsonKing said:
Shahi Stan said:
beats hawt tho
EmeraldRuins said:
thats good enough for me 
Shahi Stan said:
rapping probably helps you become a better rapper tbh
dont take my word for it tho
dont take my word for it tho
TheCrimsonKing said:
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