[EmeraldRuins1]

https://soundcloud.com/emerald-ruins%2Ffirst-attempt-at-rapping-tbh
recorded with a web cam mic so sorry bout the shitty quality tbh, either way i know its pretty wack

beat produced by me, pm a nigga if u lookin for hot beats tbh

m 15 so dont take my lyrics seriously, i was just doing this for fun i dont shoot people tbh

Spoiler

but i do murder niggas

na but really doe, constructive criticism plz i wanna b better dan kendrick lamar aka 2pac dad

edit: if it helps i put the lyrics in the description cuz i know sometimes its hard to make out wat im sayin at times tbh

http://soundcloud.com/emerald-ruins/first-attempt-at-rapping-tbh

 

[EmeraldRuins1]

dam with all this advice ill improve in no time !

 

[Mois.Kings]

work on dat flow boiii. and obviously get a better mic. and just write alot!

 

[louis tomlinson]

dat pitch down<<

flow needs work too tbh

 

[EmeraldRuins1]

work on dat flow boiii

flow

got yall ! thanks tbh !

dat pitch down<<

for that real southern feel cuz i havent gotten my big black man voice yet tbh

 

[Soultrekker]

i havent gotten my big black man voice yet tbh

Haha

 

[louis tomlinson]

got yall ! thanks tbh !

for that real southern feel cuz i havent gotten my big black man voice yet tbh

are black? idk why i pictured you as white lmao

 

[EmeraldRuins1]

are black? idk why i pictured you as white lmao

white boys dont get da bitches wet da way da homie emerald does

so ya im not white

 

[louis tomlinson]

white boys dont get da bitches wet da way da homie emerald does

so ya im not white

 

[Isco]

As a proud member of Texas, I disapprove of this attempt at southern rap.

 

[louis tomlinson]

As a proud member of Florida, I disapprove of this attempt at southern rap.

 

[TheCrimsonKing]

What are some flow 'exercises' you guys would suggest, not just for OP but any young rapper? Just write a ton?

 

[Mois.Kings]

What are some flow 'exercises' you guys would suggest, not just for OP but any young rapper? Just write a ton?

rap you're favorite songs alot i guess. when you write say it outloud alot too.

 

[EmeraldRuins1]

As a proud member of Texas, I disapprove of this attempt at southern rap.

 

[Isco]

beats hawt tho

 

[EmeraldRuins1]

beats hawt tho

thats good enough for me

 

[locks]

What are some flow 'exercises' you guys would suggest, not just for OP but any young rapper? Just write a ton?

rapping probably helps you become a better rapper tbh
dont take my word for it tho