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yo how is my first attempt at rapping doe ?

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https://soundcloud.com/emerald-ruins%2Ffirst-attempt-at-rapping-tbh
recorded with a web cam mic so sorry bout the shitty quality tbh, either way i know its pretty wack

beat produced by me, pm a ***** if u lookin for hot beats tbh :tash:

m 15 so dont take my lyrics seriously, i was just doing this for fun i dont shoot people tbh
but i do murder ****** :twisted:

na but really doe, constructive criticism plz i wanna b better dan kendrick lamar aka 2pac dad

edit: if it helps i put the lyrics in the description cuz i know sometimes its hard to make out wat im sayin at times tbh

http://soundcloud.com/emerald-ruins/first-attempt-at-rapping-tbh
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dam with all this advice ill improve in no time !
work on dat flow boiii. and obviously get a better mic. and just write alot!
dat pitch down<<

flow needs work too tbh
Gabrielreyes14 said:
work on dat flow boiii
NXGGVBXTCH said:
got yall ! thanks tbh !

NXGGVBXTCH said:
dat pitch down<<
for that real southern feel cuz i havent gotten my big black man voice yet tbh :okay:

Haha
EmeraldRuins said:
i havent gotten my big black man voice yet tbh :okay:
are black? D: idk why i pictured you as white lmao
EmeraldRuins said:
got yall ! thanks tbh !

for that real southern feel cuz i havent gotten my big black man voice yet tbh :okay:

white boys dont get da bitches wet da way da homie emerald does

so ya im not white :cmon:
NXGGVBXTCH said:
are black? D: idk why i pictured you as white lmao
:hah:
EmeraldRuins said:
white boys dont get da bitches wet da way da homie emerald does

so ya im not white :cmon:
As a proud member of Texas, I disapprove of this attempt at southern rap.
Shahi Stan said:
As a proud member of Florida, I disapprove of this attempt at southern rap.
What are some flow 'exercises' you guys would suggest, not just for OP but any young rapper? Just write a ton?
rap you're favorite songs alot i guess. when you write say it outloud alot too.
TheCrimsonKing said:
What are some flow 'exercises' you guys would suggest, not just for OP but any young rapper? Just write a ton?
:okay:
Shahi Stan said:
As a proud member of Texas, I disapprove of this attempt at southern rap.
beats hawt tho
EmeraldRuins said:
thats good enough for me :kanyeshrug:
Shahi Stan said:
beats hawt tho
rapping probably helps you become a better rapper tbh
dont take my word for it tho
TheCrimsonKing said:
What are some flow 'exercises' you guys would suggest, not just for OP but any young rapper? Just write a ton?
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