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I rapped and produced this song please tell me what you think. Also leave a comment on youtube. ID REALLY APPRECIATE IT!!!
 
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You need to work your flow a lil bit tbh. The beat suprised me, I expected some wack shit.
You're dope for your age, practice practice practice
 

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MAnt said:
You need to work your flow a lil bit tbh. The beat suprised me, I expected some wack shit.
You're dope for your age, practice practice practice
Pretty much nailed it.

Your voice sounds quite similar to early Eminem, which is a good thing imo. Keep working!
 

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That was actually pretty dope. You need to work on your overlays though, they weren't in sync with the rhymes and it kind if ruined the song. Keep practicing though, you have a lot of potential. Mind checking out my new song?
 
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