[louis tomlinson]

feedback appreciated

https://soundcloud.com/tarexx%2Fpleasure-1

 

[louis tomlinson]

Fuck It's not done of course but I forgot to put a little outro on it.. whatevs

 

[louis tomlinson]

Bump

 

[Isco]

Its pretty repetitive and the drums are soft. I'm not really feeling this at all. You've done better.

 

[BBC]

the ambient sounds or w.e i fucked with....drums were a little soft like al said...i feel it but not too much

 

[louis tomlinson]

Its pretty repetitive and the drums are soft. I'm not really feeling this at all. You've done better.

the ambient sounds or w.e i fucked with....drums were a little soft like al said...i feel it but not too much

Thanks guys, Im gonna mess with the drums a little

 

[louis tomlinson]

bump

 

[louis tomlinson]

Its pretty repetitive and the drums are soft. I'm not really feeling this at all. You've done better.

the ambient sounds or w.e i fucked with....drums were a little soft like al said...i feel it but not too much

It's still not done but do you think its better now?

I think I need to lower the new clap but idk*

 

[BBC]

It's still not done but do you think its better now?

I think I need to lower the new clap but idk*

yes i like this one better
the echo on the clap really profits off the synths

 

[louis tomlinson]

yes i like this one better
the echo on the clap really profits off the synths

ght swg, thnks mn

 

[louis tomlinson]

bmp

 

[louis tomlinson]

bmp

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[eleanor jones]

Its pretty repetitive and the drums are soft. I'm not really feeling this at all. You've done better.

gotta agree with this

 

[Soultrekker]

I like the ambiance of this track. A tiny bit repetitive but that's not a big deal.

 

[louis tomlinson]

even though most of you dont like the beat thanks for the feed

 

[Soultrekker]

even though most of you dont like the beat thanks for the feed

;-;

 

[louis tomlinson]

mjstc

 

[louis tomlinson]

mjstc

 

[Fnatic]

I feel like this is pretty nice bruhh.
The updated version was definitely a step up.
Now granted, this isn't my style of music at all, but I still respect it.
My only problem is the drums dude.
They sound like mad quantized and robotic to me.
I dont know. Maybe thats what you were going for? But imo Id change the kick and hi hats. Kick sound itself is good, I just am not digging the pattern and i guess the same goes for the hats.
Just my opinion though bruh.

 

[louis tomlinson]

I really dig it

I dont think you need hard knocking drums on this

It would be more of a transitional track

Thanks man!

I feel like this is pretty nice bruhh.
The updated version was definitely a step up.
Now granted, this isn't my style of music at all, but I still respect it.
My only problem is the drums dude.
They sound like mad quantized and robotic to me.
I dont know. Maybe thats what you were going for? But imo Id change the kick and hi hats. Kick sound itself is good, I just am not digging the pattern and i guess the same goes for the hats.
Just my opinion though bruh.

Thanks man, and I see what you mean. I was actually thinking about putting a different pattern on it and just playing it live, thanks again