[Pretty Toney]

Yes, I know it sucks lol

https://soundcloud.com/cameronrezek%2Funtitled-and-unfinished

 

[rayman]

Lots of potential bro Keep at it

 

[Pretty Toney]

Lots of potential bro Keep at it

Lol really? Well thank you!

 

[OppoTy]

Seems a bit off beat. Throw some variation in there and make it sound like you worked longer on it! lol

 

[Pretty Toney]

Seems a bit off beat. Throw some variation in there and make it sound like you worked longer on it! lol

For sure for sure, thank you!

 

[Guest]

I can hear Peaches rapping over this haha.

Good work for your first beat. What kind of beats do you ideally want to produce?

 

[PearlZ]

Good stuff for your first beat. You could add a counter melody and maybe even a bass line.

 

[Random]

The offset beat is great, i dno what to suggest though, bass line would help, maybe making the drums more dramatic aswell... idno

Maybe bringin in another instrument with a different melody

 

[Pretty Toney]

I can hear Peaches rapping over this haha.

Good work for your first beat. What kind of beats do you ideally want to produce?

Eventually, Kanye or even Neptune's style beats

 

[Pretty Toney]

Thank you everyone!

 

[Guest]

I like this.

 

[Pretty Toney]

I like this.

I like your avy

 

[K.CuDDer 23]

i like it bro..id addd a lot to it and make it a banger..i see potential

 

[Pretty Toney]

i like it bro..id addd a lot to it and make it a banger..i see potential

I'm going to work on it a lot later today, thank you!

 

[abriel23]

Work on your stuff, you have a potential. My first beats were tragic

Check my if you have a time!

http://soundcloud.com/wizard1music-3

 

[Pretty Toney]

Work on your stuff, you have a potential. My first beats were tragic

Check my if you have a time!

http://soundcloud.com/wizard1music-3

Couldn't find page

 

[abriel23]

Couldn't find page

www.soundcloud.com/wizzartmusic - this one

 

[Pretty Toney]

www.soundcloud.com/wizzartmusic - this one