[IronWillyChatha]

https://soundcloud.com/ironwillychatha%2Fvm1-prod-iwc



My first 'proper' beat still learning my way around Logic

everyone who sees this please leave a comment, just say what you think!

any advice at all much appreciated, this was great fun to make

 

[hbeats93]

chatha?

jatt?

 

[IronWillyChatha]

chatha?

jatt?

 

[hbeats93]

ssa 22g we in this kutti

 

[IronWillyChatha]

are the trap hats cheesy

 

[ESQonthetrack]

I hear that Sylenth1 preset.  I see you.  Keep it up.

 

[IronWillyChatha]

I hear that Sylenth1 preset.  I see you.  Keep it up.

thanks bro!

 

[waalex]

low end is more prominent L than R, feels unbalanced, the hats arent cheesy, the percussion patterns are good but i think the hats and snare are overly separated. think the melody after the drop needs some work, the first two  patterns are nice then theres a key change or something and it all goes weird lol. very good for a first beat!!

 

[IronWillyChatha]

low end is more prominent L than R, feels unbalanced, the hats arent cheesy, the percussion patterns are good but i think the hats and snare are overly separated. think the melody after the drop needs some work, the first two  patterns are nice then theres a key change or something and it all goes weird lol. very good for a first beat!!

thanks bro!!

v useful comments, i didn't change key haha, i was just tryna mix it up, using the octaves differently, what would you do to the melody?

 

[IronWillyChatha]

low end is more prominent L than R, feels unbalanced, the hats arent cheesy, the percussion patterns are good but i think the hats and snare are overly separated. think the melody after the drop needs some work, the first two  patterns are nice then theres a key change or something and it all goes weird lol. very good for a first beat!!

also did you mean the snare and hats are too separated rhythmically or spatially?

 

[IronWillyChatha]

bump pls

 

[scarypotter.WAV]

SICK FOR A FIRST BEAT

 

[Prophet]

Sounded better than my first tbh but it needs a chord, drone or something to give it atmosphere

 

[IronWillyChatha]

SICK FOR A FIRST BEAT

THANK YOU

Sounded better than my first tbh but it needs a chord, drone or something to give it atmosphere

will take this on board