me and my friends rap group

Wallace said:

The beats suck squirrel dick, and the fact that you're 15 doesn't matter. There's tons of 15 year olds who at least sound adequate. Your shit is just generally awful. And your voices are unlistenable.

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make a beat as good as any of them then

you guys are dicks lol

keejee said:

jk brah, do u brah...da producer got some potential man

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thanks man.. he's actaully very musically talented. every part of every beat he does himself

your flow sounds off, you gotta go with it, it sounds like you are just rapping and then picking a random beat before listening to it
Go with the flooooow

well i only heard the first song

Could be worse I mean, this was me when I was 15:

Brine said:

your flow sounds off, you gotta go with it, it sounds like you are just rapping and then picking a random beat before listening to it
Go with the flooooow

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thats one of the main problems. im trying to fix that.. thanks man!

Use my criticism as the steam to power your dreams, but this shit's extra terrible

Ya'll sound like Siri when you rappin'

Duble H Wonder said:

make a beat as good as any of them then

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I don't produce, but that's irrelevant.

I don't cook, but I can still say if food tastes like shit. You're "music" is legit awful dude. Like, not "maybe mix it better" awful or "your flow was a lil off" awful. No. It's "What the fuck dude, do your parents know you do this? Holy shit, this is a genuine embarrassment, how did you think this was acceptable to release to anyone" awful.

Living So Caucasian said:

Could be worse I mean, this was me when I was 15:

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LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOB

Living So Caucasian said:

Could be worse I mean, this was me when I was 15:

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:lol::lol::lol:
lirl
OMGGGGGGGG

Wallace said:

I don't produce, but that's irrelevant.

I don't cook, but I can still say if food tastes like shit. You're "music" is legit awful dude. Like, not "maybe mix it better" awful or "your flow was a lil off" awful. No. It's "What the fuck dude, do your parents know you do this? Holy shit, this is a genuine embarrassment, how did you think this was acceptable to release to anyone" awful.

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i understand you hate it but do you really have to be this hostile. we just started man give us a break.

Duble H Wonder said:

thanks for the actual help. very appreciated. i didnt start out thinking i was gonna be good. i wanna make progress

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No doubt man. I was right around your age when I started wanting to spit forreal(14, I'm 21 now). I had older guys help me out so I try to pay it forward. I have no clue what it's like in Boston, but I would rap with other guys in school before/after/during class every day. Do that. Buy a composition notebook and write all your rhymes in there. Find people who A) know HIP-HOP and B) you respect their opinion and let them hear you. Listen to your favorite MCs and find 1 key attribute from each of them and attempt to apply it to yourself.

Duble H Wonder said:

i understand you hate it but do you really have to be this hostile. we just started man give us a break.

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ya, you need to know how genuinely bad it is or you'll be complacent turning awful into just bad.

Wallace said:

ya, you need to know how genuinely bad it is or you'll be complacent turning awful into just bad.

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your opinion is honestly void to me now. cuz these beats are honestly not bad. fucking kill yourself

Duble H Wonder said:

i understand you hate it but do you really have to be this hostile. we just started man give us a break.

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Criticism is hurtful, but it helps you get smacked by reality quicker so you can get back on your feet to doing better things imho

Just realize, look past the obvious boons (we're just 15/16 DUUDE), sit back listen to your work, and work on your masterpiece

Duble H Wonder said:

your opinion is honestly void to me now. cuz these beats are honestly not bad. fucking kill yourself

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That's what I'm saying, you're too blind to see that what you did was in no way shape or form good. Stop getting defensive and acknowledge you universally suck.

The beats are incredibly amateur, boring, and sound like they were made by an autistic 8 year old on a FL Studio demo.

JetsonDeLorean said:

Criticism is hurtful, but it helps you get smacked by reality quicker so you can get back on your feet to doing better things imho

Just realize, look past the obvious boons (we're just 15/16 DUUDE), sit back listen to your work, and work on your masterpiece

Spoiler

and break out the chains and tell the master, peace

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lmfaoo thanks man, much appreciated

Wallace said:

That's what I'm saying, you're too blind to see that what you did was in no way shape or form good. Stop getting defensive and acknowledge you universally suck.

The beats are incredibly amateur, boring, and sound like they were made by an autistic 8 year old on a FL Studio demo.

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no they dont. this beat is honestly not bad at all http://soundcloud.com/gigantorison/impressions-featuring-wolf