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me and my friends rap group

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hey guys me and my friends have been rapping for like 6 months now and id really appreciate if yall had a listen... all the beats are produced by the leader of the group.... all original beats http://soundcloud.com/gigantorison please listen thanks!
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idrk where to put it... where does it go lol?
u guys realize we're 15 right?
but thanks anyway, you can all kill yourselves
604 said:
potential GOATs
i understand we arent good rappers we're fucking 15 but can u pay attention to the beats cuz those are basically the only things that are good... they are all original
JetsonDeLorean said:
Age really don't matter most of the time

:sarc2: :sarc2: :sarc2:
it matters most of the time when ur 15 and started 6 months ago.... kanye didnt start out making songs like he does now
NOTATS_B said:
The last kid on The Need is actually so white that he could have his own genre
he's the producer lmao
TreyOfTriforia said:
Fuck the hate dude. Do I like it? Not at all tbh. But I encourage you to keep going. Study your craft. Listen to and emulate HIP-HOP EMCEES. Practice. Write more. Focus on your cadence. Pay attention in English class and use literary devices in your work. Find out where open mics are in your area and go. Listen. Spit your verses a cappella there as Spoken Word. There's alot you can do if you actually wanna spit.

If you just wanna make bullshit tho, idk what to tell you haha
thanks for the actual help. very appreciated. i didnt start out thinking i was gonna be good. i wanna make progress
Wallace said:
The beats suck squirrel dick, and the fact that you're 15 doesn't matter. There's tons of 15 year olds who at least sound adequate. Your shit is just generally awful. And your voices are unlistenable.
make a beat as good as any of them then
keejee said:
jk brah, do u brah...da producer got some potential man
thanks man.. he's actaully very musically talented. every part of every beat he does himself
Brine said:
your flow sounds off, you gotta go with it, it sounds like you are just rapping and then picking a random beat before listening to it
Go with the flooooow
thats one of the main problems. im trying to fix that.. thanks man!
Wallace said:
I don't produce, but that's irrelevant.

I don't cook, but I can still say if food tastes like shit. You're "music" is legit awful dude. Like, not "maybe mix it better" awful or "your flow was a lil off" awful. No. It's "What the fuck dude, do your parents know you do this? Holy shit, this is a genuine embarrassment, how did you think this was acceptable to release to anyone" awful.
i understand you hate it but do you really have to be this hostile. we just started man give us a break.
Wallace said:
ya, you need to know how genuinely bad it is or you'll be complacent turning awful into just bad.
your opinion is honestly void to me now. cuz these beats are honestly not bad. fucking kill yourself
JetsonDeLorean said:
Criticism is hurtful, but it helps you get smacked by reality quicker so you can get back on your feet to doing better things imho

Just realize, look past the obvious boons (we're just 15/16 DUUDE), sit back listen to your work, and work on your masterpiece

and break out the chains and tell the master, peace :smug:
lmfaoo thanks man, much appreciated :)
Wallace said:
That's what I'm saying, you're too blind to see that what you did was in no way shape or form good. Stop getting defensive and acknowledge you universally suck.

The beats are incredibly amateur, boring, and sound like they were made by an autistic 8 year old on a FL Studio demo.
no they dont. this beat is honestly not bad at all http://soundcloud.com/gigantorison/impressions-featuring-wolf
Wallace said:

It sounds like a Nintendo soundtrack reject. It's wack dude, stop denying it.
well your honestly the first one to tell me that... we  have actaul signed rappers in my city that asked to be on that remix
Wallace said:
lol OK. Signed to who? They're own labels?

Please stop the music.
one used to be signed to atlantic... nahh u can leave this now cuzthe hate is very un appreciated... kill urself
Wallace said:
Haha OK. Have fun being a joke.
have fun going no where in life
TreyOfTriforia said:
Would you accept that beat on Kanye's next album? Hell, on Cyhi's next mixtape? Don't copout and say "We're just 15 year old white boys who just started so grade us on a curve". I didn't get as good as I am(not being cocky, just sayin) with that attitude. I aim every day to be ill enough to take out anyone, Lupe, Kendrick, Blu, KRIT, ANYONE! at any given moment. If you don't develop that competitive drive and desire for perfection, you won't develop as an artist of any sort, but especially not as an MC.
i understand what yourr saying.... we gotta get out of a regular room and go into a studio. and also we dont have access to bands / orchestras like actaul artists so were trying as hard as possible to sound not has homemade
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