The beats suck squirrel dick, and the fact that you're 15 doesn't matter. There's tons of 15 year olds who at least sound adequate. Your shit is just generally awful. And your voices are unlistenable.Duble H Wonder said:i understand we arent good rappers we're fucking 15 but can u pay attention to the beats cuz those are basically the only things that are good... they are all original
thanks for the actual help. very appreciated. i didnt start out thinking i was gonna be good. i wanna make progressTreyOfTriforia said:Fuck the hate dude. Do I like it? Not at all tbh. But I encourage you to keep going. Study your craft. Listen to and emulate HIP-HOP EMCEES. Practice. Write more. Focus on your cadence. Pay attention in English class and use literary devices in your work. Find out where open mics are in your area and go. Listen. Spit your verses a cappella there as Spoken Word. There's alot you can do if you actually wanna spit.
If you just wanna make bullshit tho, idk what to tell you haha
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