[Veic]

Just a little song I wrote as a warm up.

Chorus:

I wake up to screamin
(her smile)
I wake up to screamin
(her smile)
I wake up to screamin
(her smile)
I wake up to screamin

Then hit the climax as I

Verse 1:

Take a breath of air.

My heart pounding like good sex.

She's no longer there.

Oh girl your love.

Was 100.

Was so real.

I'd do anything girl.

I'd even go for  the kill.

I wake up to screamin

As your eyes pop out like a vein

I wake up to screamin

Girl I remember when you called my name

I wake up to screamin

Loved how your back arched up like a cat

I wake up to screamin

Why did I have to do you wrong like that?

Bridge:

Ohh girl

I love you so.

Yes girl

Say my name x2

Oh girl

I loved you so

Blew out your back

While I spread your brains across the flo

Yeaaa

Brains across the floor

Oh yeaaa

Brains across the floor.

Verse 2:

Now tell me girl how you got so smart.

Hush hush little baby

Just play the part

Cheat with me

You know he won't pass the test

I can make you happy girl

Just like your ex

Bridge:

Oh baby…

Oh honey

Oh baby

I love your style

Oh baby

Oh honey

Oh baby

I'm wild

Oh baby

Oh honey

Oh baby

Get dressed

Cause baby girl your about to go and meet your ex.

 

[rybka]

Sounds catchy. I imagined it in LL Cool J's voice for some reason. Nice!

 

[Veic]

Sounds catchy. I imagined it in LL Cool J's voice for some reason. Nice!

Haha thank you. Totally different from the response that I had in mind, but that is mostly because of what I was thinking about when I wrote this song.

Edit: Just to clarify a little bit, read this in a darker tone in mind.

 

[Guest]

Haha thank you. Totally different from the response that I had in mind, but that is mostly because of what I was thinking about when I wrote this song.

Edit: Just to clarify a little bit, read this in a darker tone in mind.

yeah, it came off rather dark.
I dig it though! great work.