[amilcarj]

I recorded this a while ago, tell me what you think

https://soundcloud.com/ajay-4%2Fthe-one http://soundcloud.com/ajay-4/the-one

 

[amilcarj]

any comments??

 

[amilcarj]

bump

 

[MrJeezy]

I like the beat

 

[amilcarj]

I like the beat

errr wat about my bars??

 

[MrJeezy]

errr wat about my bars??

Not really a fan of this sort of rapping, but the bars are good

 

[slimklp]

Ok. Its hard to understand what you are saying at the beginning, because the quality isnt there. Work on the quality, so we can hear you better. Your flow starts off really choppy, but by the end, you really ride the beat well. The beat is pretty good. I would say a six out of ten, right now.  Work on  it some more and complete it and it can be better.

 

[Kanye#1]

Ok. Its hard to understand what you are saying at the beginning, because the quality isnt there. Work on the quality, so we can hear you better. Your flow starts off really choppy, but by the end, you really ride the beat well. The beat is pretty good. I would say a six out of ten, right now.  Work on  it some more and complete it and it can be better.

 

[M47KY108]

o shit boy this kinda hard not even gonna lie

 

[amilcarj]

o shit boy this kinda hard not even gonna lie

 

[WeedTheRoses]

It's too short, but I do agree that your flow improves near the end of the song. How long did you work on this for?

 

[amilcarj]

It's too short, but I do agree that your flow improves near the end of the song. How long did you work on this for?

well it was supposed to be a feature on someones mixtape but hes taking to long to release
so i thought i might aswell let people hear my part
i think it took me a couple days, coz i wrote 2 verses and made it into one