you try to hard for punchlines and then they fail to make sense. for example : my whips are high definition like bluray
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i see what you sayingmswegs said:you try to hard for punchlines and then they fail to make sense. for example : my whips are high definition like bluray
props though, i didn't mean to come off as mean at all nice beat selection and its sounds good. I may also encourage you to improve pronunciation a slight bit, but I like your flowLaudacity said:i see what you saying
I like your flow a lot. Good song. But like mswegs said keep working on that lyrics/punchlines.
Keep doing your thing, and keep posting on here, would love to see you grow as an artist.
Keep doing your thing, and keep posting on here, would love to see you grow as an artist.
appreciate it bruh, will do.The Insurance said:I like your flow a lot. Good song. But like mswegs said keep working on that lyrics/punchlines.
Keep doing your thing, and keep posting on here, would love to see you grow as an artist.
No problem.Laudacity said:appreciate it bruh, will do.
Check out my newest beat here: http://www.kanyetothe.com/forum/index.php?topic=107984.0
comment on the thread what you think about it.
i did.The Insurance said:No problem.
Check out my newest beat here: http://www.kanyetothe.com/forum/index.php?topic=107984.0
comment on the thread what you think about it.
Thanks for the feedbackRobHiko. said:Really dope flow. Good rap voice too. Sounds like your voice was made for rapping, but your lyrics can use some work as others said.
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