you try to hard for punchlines and then they fail to make sense. for example : my whips are high definition like bluray
i see what you sayingmswegs said:you try to hard for punchlines and then they fail to make sense. for example : my whips are high definition like bluray
props though, i didn't mean to come off as mean at all nice beat selection and its sounds good. I may also encourage you to improve pronunciation a slight bit, but I like your flowLaudacity said:i see what you saying
appreciate it bruh, will do.The Insurance said:I like your flow a lot. Good song. But like mswegs said keep working on that lyrics/punchlines.
Keep doing your thing, and keep posting on here, would love to see you grow as an artist.
No problem.Laudacity said:appreciate it bruh, will do.
i did.The Insurance said:No problem.
Check out my newest beat here: http://www.kanyetothe.com/forum/index.php?topic=107984.0
comment on the thread what you think about it.
Thanks for the feedbackRobHiko. said:Really dope flow. Good rap voice too. Sounds like your voice was made for rapping, but your lyrics can use some work as others said.