KTT Beamin' Remix

1884 Views 38 Replies 10 Participants Last post by RichAzure, Oct 20, 2010

FiascoFrenzy

Discussion Starter · Oct 10, 2010

With the success of the Go To Sleep remix, I thought I'd start out on this. Now I have little to no spittin' skills, I just don't have the voice for it. But I'd be willing to donate a verse I wrote which goes over top of the instrumental perfectly for verse 1.

As I fly high, past the spires of my peers
The atmosphere cant stop me
Not a slug to my ear
Or even through my eye
Cause it’s the sky, that stimulates my kind
Gives vision to my mind, provides me with the sight
No my iris doesn’t mind that he’s useless on this flight, yeah
They’re lookin’ up, but me, I’m passin’ by
All eyes towards the sky, well, all eyes but I
Cause if mine look down, the ground will come up high
You see I don’t want to die before my words reach their sight
Until my message hits their eyes, so they can’t forget my climb
Nope, not like Miley, no this one’s of the mind, you see it’s all about the reach
But I won’t preach, no, just check the rhyme, but I’m running out of time
So I hope my lines teach, this ain’t all about the beat, that would leave me like a mime
And without words I would just fall from the sky

PS kudos to anyone who can spot the double meaning towards the beginning

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Black Smith

· #21 · Oct 12, 2010

Bump, but finish Go To Sleep first.

roblem?:
Wait, that's me. :facepalm:

:facepalm:

Fame Killz

· #22 · Oct 14, 2010

I got a verse for this song recorded if yall wanna throw me on this.

Black Smith

· #23 · Oct 14, 2010

♫ Fame Killz. said:
I got a verse for this song recorded if yall wanna throw me on this.

Yes!!!!

Fame Killz

· #24 · Oct 14, 2010

Coldplay Expert said:
Yes!!!!

i'll post here soon :work:

:work:

Frak

· #25 · Oct 14, 2010

I wrote this a while back pretty rapidly

You may ask me, who am I?
But were really the same, I mean you and I,
All of us I mean, I’m talking human kind,
But there is some difference, if you don’t mind,
Lets see what happens, if we give you a mic,
Even if the truths in sight I think that you would lie,
You keep your posture straight, and your shoes a tied,
I like to laugh a little, I wear a loosened tie,
Just live your life, don’t worry if the rules apply
Your dressed in a fool’s disguise I guess im a cooler guy,
You dont scratch the surface, I like to scooba dive,
And I think we know who will drown and who will rise
You live for greener grasses, I live for bluer skies,
Its not where your present at, but where your future lies,
So in summary, were all unified,
But if your dreamin’ start beamin’ maybe you will shine

Hey im the new guy, let me introduce my rhymes,
Who did, the blueprint, im coming with a new design,
Survival of the fittest, hip hop its evolution time,
I’m sorry King George, its time to revolutionize
You’re an obstacle, please move aside,
You say its impossible, you and your foolish pride
I represent freedom like the red blue and white,
Searching for a savior? First result on that google site,
Its me, electric like a flew a kite,
You make no sense, your deaf or maybe you are blind,
I cant rap cuz im a jewish guy with bluish eyes?
Well don’t cross me cuz lyrically I can crucify,
Like a sumo guy and a scoop of fries I am supersized,
Through the wire, through the vine, through the fire, through your spine,
Some keep on and some go for suicide,
Well here it is you decide, now’s your chance do or die

RichAzure

· #26 · Oct 14, 2010

Coldplay Expert said:
Bump, but finish Go To Sleep first.
roblem?:
Wait, that's me.

Oogity

· #27 · Oct 14, 2010

Tight verses. FiascoFrenzy, for that double meaning are you talking about the Atmosphere reference? I'm a fan so I caught that right away but idk if you're talking about something else. *shrug*

FiascoFrenzy

Discussion Starter · #28 · Oct 14, 2010

Oogity said:
Tight verses. FiascoFrenzy, for that double meaning are you talking about the Atmosphere reference? I'm a fan so I caught that right away but idk if you're talking about something else. *shrug*

Yeah! I'm not sure if anyone else noticed, but you are certainly the first to point out the atmosphere/slug reference.

Black Smith

· #29 · Oct 14, 2010

FiascoFrenzy said:
Yeah! I'm not sure if anyone else noticed, but you are certainly the first to point out the atmosphere/slug reference.

:facepalm:

Well, I failed.

I really should start listening to them more, then... My old high school buddy was a big fan of theirs...he hooked me up with a couple of songs... Haven't really lent an ear to them since, though....

Oogity

· #30 · Oct 14, 2010

New album just came out so it's a decent time to start listening. Pretty good IMO but they've done better.

Oogity

· #31 · Oct 14, 2010

Wrote this this morning, so I just thought I'd share it with all of you.

Smile on my face and a gleam in my eye
Lasers on the rise as we beam through the skies
Atlantic doesn't like that Lupe's down with the Urkel's
But it's all good now because it's come full circle
Reject the 360, that's what Lupe did
He's stickin true to himself and he's teachin the kids
There's a flock of wack rappers all thinkin they flames
But we're not down with them because they're lacking the brains
The child's been rebelling and fightin for keeps
And it's good to be a Laser, we're on a winning streak
I wonder what it took to get the point across
30,000 fans or one letter from Nas
All City Chess Club, yeah you know that's the team
Because we like conscious rappers. We ARE human beings
March 8th needs to get here, couldn't be soon enough
Yesterday nobody cared but tomorrow has come.

Alternate final two lines:
Is Fiasco Friday still on since we got our wishes?
Just ask Rick James: "It's a celebration bitches!"

Save

Fame Killz

· #32 · Oct 20, 2010

Throw my verse on this !

http://usershare.net/ofha8d883yr9

Black Smith

· #33 · Oct 20, 2010

♫ Fame Killz. said:
Throw my verse on this !

http://usershare.net/ofha8d883yr9

:psyboom:

Mind = blown.

Fame Killz

· #34 · Oct 20, 2010

Coldplay Expert said:
Mind = blown.

is that a good mindfuck or a bad one? lol

Black Smith

· #35 · Oct 20, 2010

♫ Fame Killz. said:
is that a good mindfuck or a bad one? lol

It's a good thing, man. Good work!!

RichAzure

· #36 · Oct 20, 2010

I was wondering if there was a centrifugal topic or if we were gonna just throw on verses?

Fame Killz

· #37 · Oct 20, 2010

Coldplay Expert said:
It's a good thing, man. Good work!!

Kale07 said:
that shit was good your an aspiring rapper or you just did it for fun?

Thanks guys

and I'm an aspiring rapper, but it's also fun :parrot:

:parrot:

Fame Killz

· #38 · Oct 20, 2010

Kale07 said:
I wanna do a verse but I've never written a rap before lol and no mic

I also have no mic, I used my phone and had someone mix the track together, lol whatever I can do to rap I'll do it because I love music. Hopping in the studio soon tho for my mixtape, and buying a mic, ya'll will hear more of me soon.

RichAzure

· #39 · Oct 20, 2010

♫ Fame Killz. said:
I also have no mic, I used my phone and had someone mix the track together, lol whatever I can do to rap I'll do it because I love music. Hopping in the studio soon tho for my mixtape, and buying a mic, ya'll will hear more of me soon.

RUN FOR THE HILLS! Na bro, Glad you're doing your thing

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