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I wrote this a while back pretty rapidly



You may ask me, who am I?
But were really the same, I mean you and I,
All of us I mean, I’m talking human kind,
But there is some difference, if you don’t mind,
Lets see what happens, if we give you a mic,
Even if the truths in sight I think that you would lie,
You keep your posture straight, and your shoes a tied,
I like to laugh a little, I wear a loosened tie,
Just live your life, don’t worry if the rules apply
Your dressed in a fool’s disguise I guess im a cooler guy,
You dont scratch the surface, I like to scooba dive,
And I think we know who will drown and who will rise
You live for greener grasses, I live for bluer skies,
Its not where your present at, but where your future lies,
So in summary, were all unified,
But if your dreamin’ start beamin’ maybe you will shine


Hey im the new guy, let me introduce my rhymes,
Who did, the blueprint, im coming with a new design,
Survival of the fittest, hip hop its evolution time,
I’m sorry King George, its time to revolutionize
You’re an obstacle, please move aside,
You say its impossible, you and your foolish pride
I represent freedom like the red blue and white,
Searching for a savior? First result on that google site,
Its me, electric like a flew a kite,
You make no sense, your deaf or maybe you are blind,
I cant rap cuz im a jewish guy with bluish eyes?
Well don’t cross me cuz lyrically I can crucify,
Like a sumo guy and a scoop of fries I am supersized,
Through the wire, through the vine, through the fire, through your spine,
Some keep on and some go for suicide,
Well here it is you decide, now’s your chance do or die
 

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Oogity said:
Tight verses. FiascoFrenzy, for that double meaning are you talking about the Atmosphere reference? I'm a fan so I caught that right away but idk if you're talking about something else. *shrug*
Yeah! I'm not sure if anyone else noticed, but you are certainly the first to point out the atmosphere/slug reference.
 

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FiascoFrenzy said:
Yeah! I'm not sure if anyone else noticed, but you are certainly the first to point out the atmosphere/slug reference.
:facepalm:  Well, I failed.  :p  I really should start listening to them more, then... My old high school buddy was a big fan of theirs...he hooked me up with a couple of songs... Haven't really lent an ear to them since, though....
 

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Wrote this this morning, so I just thought I'd share it with all of you.

Smile on my face and a gleam in my eye
Lasers on the rise as we beam through the skies
Atlantic doesn't like that Lupe's down with the Urkel's
But it's all good now because it's come full circle
Reject the 360, that's what Lupe did
He's stickin true to himself and he's teachin the kids
There's a flock of wack rappers all thinkin they flames
But we're not down with them because they're lacking the brains
The child's been rebelling and fightin for keeps
And it's good to be a Laser, we're on a winning streak
I wonder what it took to get the point across
30,000 fans or one letter from Nas
All City Chess Club, yeah you know that's the team
Because we like conscious rappers. We ARE human beings
March 8th needs to get here, couldn't be soon enough
Yesterday nobody cared but tomorrow has come.


Alternate final two lines:
Is Fiasco Friday still on since we got our wishes?
Just ask Rick James: "It's a celebration bitches!"
 

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Kale07 said:
I wanna do a verse but I've never written a rap before lol and no mic
I also have no mic, I used my phone and had someone mix the track together, lol whatever I can do to rap I'll do it because I love music. Hopping in the studio soon tho for my mixtape, and buying a mic, ya'll will hear more of me soon.
 

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♫ Fame Killz. said:
I also have no mic, I used my phone and had someone mix the track together, lol whatever I can do to rap I'll do it because I love music. Hopping in the studio soon tho for my mixtape, and buying a mic, ya'll will hear more of me soon.
RUN FOR THE HILLS! Na bro, Glad you're doing your thing
 
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