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(Thanks to RelaxRelapse for the cover!)

Since there are plenty of other better candidates for the official KTT Don't Stop remix, i just decided to do my own little remix! i really like how it turned out, and i think i bought the energy needed to improve the overall sound. hope you guys like it! any criticism is welcome as long as its constructive. i especially want your views on the last little verse; i wasnt super sure about it.

https://soundcloud.com/officialjcm%2Fdont-stop-final
DL: http://www.mediafire.com/?hg9tr6aw9gao3qv

-LYRICS-
Ding! fresh off the press
said you wanted proof, so accept this vest
need to protect, shots fired from the west,
but none get to me, they know better than to mess
yes, with westerville's best
comin in smooth to remove all bets
flames from my breath will expel all threats
said you need a hero, i'm the last one left

did i say hero? ***** i meant zero*
ruler of the world, callin shots like pacino
first name "i am", last name "the boss"
make a ***** tremble when they stare into my geass*

(*anime reference :p show called Code Geass. never watched the whole series but i know the general plot)

and that's J to the C
comin at you live from that K double T
new domain, same rap game
resume operations from a new batcave
it's how we behave, assume no shame
work night and day to retain that flame
try not to change, keep the flow so dope
i'm doin battle with the blokes in the locs
peerin past my panes, to feel my pain
but they can't even see my shades
take this stage, unleash my rage
introduction of a brand new page

-break-

hold up, did i say you exempt?
***** i won't stop, 'less you repent
in a small ville, but i'm no clark kent
i had to give it up like lent
but i'm here to defend from the ones hell bent
to prevent the advent of the heavens,
sent, to get my crown, to lock **** down
man im here to represent my town
opposite of hollow, livin by the motto
handbrake broke, so you know we gotta follow
through, constant, straight to end
i see the finish line right round the bend

don't stop!
i said, don't stop!

in it together, now to forever
its JCM, end with the letters
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It's pretty good but it will be great if your rapping was a little louder but good job on the lyrics
 

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Yeah make the vocals louder. If you are going to rerecord it I'd say add more passion to your flow. Good lyrics.
 

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Newlopw said:
It's pretty good but it will be great if your rapping was a little louder but good job on the lyrics
 

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ok it wont let me quote, but you all said the same thing so thanks! yeah the guy running the remix thread on showcase said that too. next time i get a chance to record ill try and bring more energy!

and Fame, i like it!
 

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JCM99 said:
ok it wont let me quote, but you all said the same thing so thanks! yeah the guy running the remix thread on showcase said that too. next time i get a chance to record ill try and bring more energy!

and Fame, i like it!
:h5:

RelaxRelapse said:
We can have a "kicked off the don't stop" don't stop remix...
Bahahaha!  For real!  They ousted Fame Killz, too...  :-\
 

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Bahahaha!  For real!  They ousted Fame Killz, too...  :-\
Lol they played me, but w/e not gonna argue with them, I'll be mastering my verse tonight, anyone tryna hop on?
 

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♫ Fame Killz. said:
Lol they played me, but w/e not gonna argue with them, I'll be mastering my verse tonight, anyone tryna hop on?
I would try, but I doubt I'll have time to do anything at all this week.  :iunno:
 

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lmao, i need to step up then. i should have time to record on friday if thats not too late. i need to finish writing my verse then bring more energy next time i rap it.
 

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RelaxRelapse said:
We can have a "kicked off the don't stop" don't stop remix...
lmao, thats always an option! but dang they didnt like it Fame? :iunno:
 

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lmao, thats always an option! but dang they didnt like it Fame? :iunno:
Nah, it's cool tho because I can just do it solo and put it on my mixtape.

If anyone wants to hop on with me send acapella, because my boy is mastering my verse tonight.
 

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ok so basically i just went and finished this all solo. i think it turned out pretty good! gonna upload soon.
 
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