[Wb08Op4P79cGJK]

This is an updated version of a beat I posted yesterday This is a jazz type beat that's unfinished,this is only the first draft.Please,please,please give it a listen and any feedback is greatly appreciated because I don't really play my music to anybody,thank you.
https://soundcloud.com/the-joy%2Fg-o-o-d-beat-3

 

[Whea7s]

Only post full beats

 

[Soso]

This is pretty nice bro, i like it

 

[Wb08Op4P79cGJK]

Only post full beats

Ye I will in the future,I've posted a longer updated version,what do you think?

 

[Wb08Op4P79cGJK]

This is pretty nice bro, i like it

Thanks,I've posted an updated version,could you check it out?

 

[Wb08Op4P79cGJK]

bump

 

[Soso]

Thanks,I've posted an updated version,could you check it out?

sure

 

[Wb08Op4P79cGJK]

sure

Have you listened yet?

 

[Soso]

Have you listened yet?

Yea i heard it sounds good

 

[Wb08Op4P79cGJK]

bump

 

[Wb08Op4P79cGJK]

and another bump

 

[Roman]

Not bad, I think it needs to be sped up a bit or have something added to it to make it more interesting imo

 

[Wb08Op4P79cGJK]

Not bad, I think it needs to be sped up a bit or have something added to it to make it more interesting imo

Ye I was thinking about speeding it up and I'm definately going to add more to it.Thanks for the feedback

 

[Roman]

Ye I was thinking about speeding it up and I'm definately going to add more to it.Thanks for the feedback

No worries, keep at it bro

 

[B-ri]

gonna listen now

 

[Nathn]

Sounds empty, I'd say add some more percussion (especially hats & cymbals) and some other things that I can't really pick out atm.

 

[Wb08Op4P79cGJK]

Sounds empty, I'd say add some more percussion (especially hats & cymbals) and some other things that I can't really pick out atm.

Ye I'm definately going to add some hi hats,just wanted to post a rough version on here to get feedback.Thanks for the advice

 

[Ivy Crimson]

not too sure about the sounds or sample, but it could easily be touched up

 

[Wb08Op4P79cGJK]

not too sure about the sounds or sample, but it could easily be touched up

Do you mean the trumpets?Should I change them for something else

 

[Ivy Crimson]

Do you mean the trumpets?Should I change them for something else

they sound really fake, maybe a synth lead instead, it still doesn't sound like a jazz type beat.