Not really. I mean, I've liked your flow from the start, lyrics are about a C+ with some dope lines here and there, but lyrical ability usually grows the more you rap and to me, you have potential to be pretty dope, as long as you put in the necessary time and effort

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Discussion Starter · #26 · Oct 20, 2010

Synopsis said:
Not really. I mean, I've liked your flow from the start, lyrics are about a C+ with some dope lines here and there, but lyrical ability usually grows the more you rap and to me, you have potential to be pretty dope, as long as you put in the necessary time and effort

Great dude

really appreciate that, I'm trying hard not to use similies, my old videos that's kinda all I used so I'm trying to step it up step by step.

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· #27 · Oct 20, 2010

♫ Fame Killz. said:
Great dude really appreciate that, I'm trying hard not to use similies, my old videos that's kinda all I used so I'm trying to step it up step by step.

I've been confused on this, whatcis a similie? Also there are many different like styles of rapping. Some dudes have a great flow,some are light years ahead when it comes to metaphors, rhyme scheme stuff like that. Others are great storytellers. To me though, what sets the greats apart, is not focusing on one style, but to try and be good in every category

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Discussion Starter · #28 · Oct 20, 2010

Synopsis said:
I've been confused on this, whatcis a similie? Also there are many different like styles of rapping. Some dudes have a great flow,some are light years ahead when it comes to metaphors, rhyme scheme stuff like that. Others are great storytellers. To me though, what sets the greats apart, is not focusing on one style, but to try and be good in every category

A similie is when you use "like"

ex: had her sucking like a vacuum
sexy skinny girl, suttin like a bad broom

I'm trying not to do that shit and flow nicely, so far my flow is golden IMO, need to work on the lyrics next, then delivery.

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· #29 · Oct 20, 2010

♫ Fame Killz. said:
A similie is when you use "like"

ex: had her sucking like a vacuum
sexy skinny girl, suttin like a bad broom
I'm trying not to do that shit and flow nicely, so far my flow is golden IMO, need to work on the lyrics next, then delivery.

Oh that's what I thought. I don't like using those. I'm tryin to work on my flow right now, I think I've got pretty good lyrics. But yeah, you do have nice flow, and I can't wait to hear your next song and your continued improvement

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Discussion Starter · #30 · Oct 20, 2010

To anyone who didn't notice and is gonna ask "why u got distortion on?"

the song has a futuristic feel to it, the beat, the distortion, the cover ( a robot ) and some of the lyrics hint at the "robotic flow"

can you find the lyrics that hint at this? :joe:

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· #31 · Oct 20, 2010

Liked the distortion, but there were some static pops in the background though. I liked it. Its always hard to do a Lupe Remix, because he comes with it so hard. But you did a pretty dope job man. Liked the last line and effect on it. Keep it up, we should collab one day.

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