[Smooth Operator]

This is a song I recorded today. The concept behind the song is pretty deep. First verse is the Angels telling me to fall in love with this girl and that she's a very good girl. Second verse is the Demons telling me this girl is a hoe, and that I should just have sex with her and leave her. It's a battle that many guys often go through in their head. Listen to the song (the entire song) and give me feedback. Thanks.

Link: http://limelinx.com/files/6aadf9213a30d6439f079ec08735bd73

 

[henry.]

Good idea, I like the track but it's missing something. I like the way the beat changes too, thats dope.

 

[Smooth Operator]

Appreciate it man. All feedback is good.

 

[henry.]

Appreciate it man. All feedback is good.

Hope you didn't get the wrong idea, I wasn't bashing your song. I'm just saying it lacks of things like good mixing and etc.  as a rapper your pretty good.

 

[Smooth Operator]

Yeah I use a thirty dollar mic so its tough for my stuff to sound exremely professional. But thanks man