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https://soundcloud.com/doxey%2Fhappy-after
Tracks called Happy After

[Verse1]
The first time heart break is the worst thing your heart can take
Speaking from experience
Now peering in from out the box
All my feelings had me lost
When wondering what set her off
How could doing so much wrong, push me right along
And getting so damn hurt pull me right back to earth
If you fight back it's worse
Got my sight back, it worked
We broke up that night
The first girl I saw that could blind me from the light
Had me sighing from her sight
So why is love so damn hard for us
The more you fall apart it's so hard to trust
We got back together, we broke back up
Then I found another girl oh wait I screwed that up
Why do picture perfect things come at the blink of an eye,
Now I'm sitting sinking missing all her kisses goodbye
Still made her read through the lines
When what I should of done was gave her a sign and explained why
So here it goes:
I can't do this to you no more
You see sitting on a life where I'll be right out the door
Before a thought could even enter his head
she opened up her mouth and said
[Breakdown]
You'll be happy never after
Hope you're happy looking after
All those things that you were happily after
But after the happiness passed
I had to look past
Her and all her happiness after

[Chorus]
Happy ending just to mend me
I gotta make it
Where will that decision send me
I just can't take it
To either hold on or let it all go
I gotta choose, I, I gotta choose
I gotta choose

[Verse 2]
I can't take it he said with his hands to his head
I thought maybe it's me but I can't handle this mess
I held the candle to handle and contain the flame
The love to watch a smile grow made every child know
No matter the burn he held the flame with his palms
Hates causing harm when going off like a car alarm
Human was the least I suspected
When he mentioned how much he loved our presence
I just never smelt the flowers
now sitting in a different pot I squint and watch the petals fall
Wishing on that mission of remission to revision our future
When visited I see him envision it
The snap shots of the snapped spots
Make me snap odds and map thoughts
But back then I'd sit back and
just stress from afar
and only pour the gas which ignited us all
[Breakdown]
Thats when he said
I'll be happy never after
Hope you're happy looking after
Me and all those things that you're happily after
after the happiness passed us
I had to look past,
Our past to make our happiness after

[Chorus]
Happy ending just to mend me
I gotta make it
Where will that decision send me
I just can't take it
To either hold on or let it all go
I gotta choose, I, I gotta choose
I gotta choose

[Verse3]
Battling the concepts of why we aren't on yet
Makes it even harder to watch a struggling father
Hate the image he sees as simple as he used to be
What used to be is so over used with me
It's a long road ahead, but in my heads a traveling  man
Who couldn't let anyone shatter a plan slash dream
Yelling in the mirror why can't he!
Cause through He I can climb
With critiques I'll survive
My plans set in stone it all rooted from a poem
Which all rooted from her and home and feeling so alone
I'm down to earth, and still planting all the seeds
And one day I'll be the  only roots we need

[Chorus?]
To either hold on or let it all go
I gotta choose, I, I gotta choose
I gotta choose

[Breakdown]
Thats when I realized
We'll be happy ever after
I'm happy looking after
Us and all those things that keep us happily after
And if the happiness passed
I'll be happy to look back
To find the smiles, the tears, an the laughter

Feedback is appreciated, but please listen to the WHOLE song, thanks :slick:
 

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ActGreedyDrinkFiji said:
vocals are a little rough and the beat needs to be turned up a tad

for some reason you remind me of Slug

idk why but you do

keep it up

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yeah dude its got a rough sound, I should probably mix it.
But it seems like im growing on you ActGreed, finally. haha.
Keep it up with them dope as f beats dude!
 

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ActGreedyDrinkFiji said:
you should man

if you want some beats I probably would work with you

PM me if interested :work:
Dude thats dope, im down to check some beats
 

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Doxey said:
:h5: thanks man! i dont know why im not getting feedback doe, any suggestions?
I'll review this tomorrow for you. I would right now, but its 5 in the morning and I don't wanna go and grab my headphones.
 

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JadeD. said:
I'll review this tomorrow for you. I would right now, but its 5 in the morning and I don't wanna go and grab my headphones.
yeah get sleep dude, quote me when you review it
 

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this shit is greatttttt, love your voie man, got loads of haracter in it imo, what other work you got?
 

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fergiem said:
this shit is greatttttt, love your voie man, got loads of haracter in it imo, what other work you got?
Just the few things on my soundcloud, but I'm getting into the routine of writing and recording, so ima start pumping stuff out.
Thanks for giving me a listen btw :slick:
 

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Doxey said:
Just the few things on my soundcloud, but I'm getting into the routine of writing and recording, so ima start pumping stuff out.
Thanks for giving me a listen btw :slick:
Don't think I went and forgot about you b. I just got called into work early, soo I'll listen when I'm off.
 

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JadeD. said:
Don't think I went and forgot about you b. I just got called into work early, soo I'll listen when I'm off.
we need more people in CS like you.
:slick:
 
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