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Sail Ciph dasmartguy said:
I wanna hear as many people as possible and hopefully collab with some of y'all soon. But I need you guys to check out one song of mine and give feedback on it before I give any on yours.
https://soundcloud.com/dasmartguy%2Fdrop9
I really like this!  Your artwork is all great and really digging your style.  Followed on SoundCloud.  On this beat the lows sound a little heavy to me but other than that its great!!
https://soundcloud.com/odycott%2Fpoppop
Here's my latest beat
 

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Coco1991 said:
I really like this!  Your artwork is all great and really digging your style.  Followed on SoundCloud.  On this beat the lows sound a little heavy to me but other than that its great!!
https://soundcloud.com/odycott%2Fpoppop
Here's my latest beat
Yo, I dig this bro and thanks for the follow and feedback! I followed back!
 

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Sail Ciph dasmartguy said:
I wanna hear as many people as possible and hopefully collab with some of y'all soon. But I need you guys to check out one song of mine and give feedback on it before I give any on yours.
https://soundcloud.com/dasmartguy%2Fdrop9
I like this bro. I can low key make something for the females on this. Kinda sound like something PND would get on. I'll definitely check out more of your beats.
 

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Sail Ciph dasmartguy said:
I wanna hear as many people as possible and hopefully collab with some of y'all soon. But I need you guys to check out one song of mine and give feedback on it before I give any on yours.
https://soundcloud.com/dasmartguy%2Fdrop9
okay i think it's pretty cool
reminds me of flylo

the reason why i don't like it is because there's no dynamic to the track
i'm sure you just used a DAW which is okay but for me it sounds flat
 

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Sail Ciph dasmartguy said:
I appreciate the beat for its uniqueness but the mix sounds a little muddy to me and the track kind of lacks energy.

Coco1991 said:
I legitimately fuck with this. The mix sounds clean and the nostalgic vibe makes it very smooth and relaxing to listen to.

SoHelpMeKev said:
I salute you on your songwriting ability. Your music sounds well put together but if I were you I'd work on your delivery and just trying to make each and every bar sound "better", just so that the words hit the listener more.

thenewdream said:
Idk what genre this is supposed to be and its definitely not my taste so its hard for me to judge it, but I can hear your vocals, I just think that it pretty repetetive and your vocals don't sound completely in tune with the instrumental.

thebestan96 said:
Your beats start out very nice and I really like the vibe but it just gets a little repetitive after a while. I think it would be nice if you brought in some drums at some point.

spacey___ said:
this was cool man, unique crisply mixed stuff. love the vocal sample. keep noticing your tracks getting doper and doper, gave it a like and will share

https://soundcloud.com/yunggawdspace%2Faneurysmprodmelee
I think your voice sounds good for rapping, and your writing isn't boring or anything, but I think you should switch up your beat selection a little bit cuz the sample sounds kinda basic.

KingKailez said:
Very smooth instrumentation. Only thing I could think to add would be to some higher frequencies to kinda balance out the mix more other than that dope work. I followed you on Sound Cloud.

Could I get your opinion on this ?
https://soundcloud.com/kingkailez%2Fzenith
This beat sounds nice. I wouldn't call it a Kendrick type beat tho. Also that bass sounds a little stale. If I was you I would at least switch up the wave. Also the drop should come in harder.

Swellthy said:
You really need to work on your mixing. Nothing really sounds mixed in right, except maybe those reverbed snaps. But that 808 makes the track sound pretty muddy. The actual melody is nice tho.

leave room 4 nature said:
i really fuck with the track in OP.

i'm 16, and putting out some very unique work in my opinion. check it out and hit me up if you're willing to collab, i can put out some very interesting stuff for basically any type of vocals to go over. i have sold beats before btw

https://alwaysoutside.bandcamp.com/track/droste-dive-unfinished
This is beautiful. Your instrumentation and mixing are on another level. You have a lot of potential. My only suggestions would be to have the snare stand out a little bit more. But I see that this is unfinished so I'm excited to see the final product.

This my first released song. I just dropped it about a week ago. Give me feedback and let me know what you think. Thank you.

https://soundcloud.com/giordano2020%2Fprey
 
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