[Guest]

As I awake in my dream
You enter unknowingly
Revealing everything
Opening chambers
Fulfilling my fantasy
Leaving a legacy
Adored by the mindless
A purpose meaningless
Though, just for acceptance
I gave my inner-self
An entrance of a new world.

Opening my eyes
A new mentality
Pursuing uncontrollably
Walking through walls
I drank every last drop of blood
Poisoned my heart
Lost my inner-guidance
Speaking but am voiceless
Not being able to shed tears
Alive at night roam gargoyles
Living in harmony
A disturbance I make
Closest are ones the farthest
Misunderstood
My reflection, own nemeses
Destruction until I
Lay in silence.

We dance together
For my deeds
You spoke to me
In order for my disobedience
A child at birth, you taken
Elders bones rip through flesh
A family lost horror
Searching reassurance
From coitus or addictions
A sight with no vision
Emotionally drained
Death awaits

Motionless
You stand beside
in the dark

 

[Guest]

Ayooo

 

[Guest]

Possibly your best work.

glad you enjoyed!


i didn't know how felt about it but felt kinda creep out after lol

 

[Guest]

Lol creepy is good

i hate it 


hardly slept LOL! 

 

[Guest]

Lol insomnia's a bitch. Make sure to get a good night's sleep tonight then.

for real, aha i hate it.

 

[iYeezy]

Another very good poem man!

 

[Guest]

Another very good poem man!

Thanks

 

[rybka]

this is crazy good!

 

[IBMindstates]

really liked it, leaves you with a haunting/eerie feel

 

[Guest]

this is crazy good!

really liked it, leaves you with a haunting/eerie feel

thanks! means a lot.

 

[rybka]

Opening my eyes
A new mentality
Pursuing uncontrollably
Walking through walls
I drank every last drop of blood
Poisoned my heart
Lost my inner-guidance
Speaking but am voiceless
Not being able to shed tears
Alive at night roam gargoyles
Living in harmony
A disturbance I make
Closest are ones the farthest
Misunderstood
My reflection, own nemeses
Destruction until I
Lay in silence.

This is my favorite part. Though I cannot describe how it somehow relates to me. I guess its just a part of a poet. Words to illustrate but none to explain.