[Guest]

Here's my boy Jay Artifacts freestyle over the classic Dead Presidents beat...Make sure you leave a comment on his video...

He's only 15 and he's an amazing lyricist

 

[deleteaccountplz1999]

Yeah, great lyrics. He is great.

 

[TRA$H]

dope as fuck!!!

 

[p4 otw]

Nice flow

 

[Guest]

It was good, but just cause he used big words doesn't mean he is lyrically amazing. Though he is good.

 

[six3one]

shit was dope

 

[Jeopardy]

mad dopeness

 

[p4 otw]

It was good, but just cause he used big words doesn't mean he is lyrically amazing. Though he is good.

what I thought after i noticed his flow.

 

[Giz]

It was good, but just cause he used big words doesn't mean he is lyrically amazing. Though he is good.

 

[Giz]

And when Grandemarshall was 15, he was better than that.

 

[amilcarj]

ooooooooooh dats sick
where can i hear more???

 

[TROY]

He has flow, but I agree, using words that slightly extend past the average 15 year old vocabulary doesn't equal lyrical proficiency. He is pretty good, but tell him to try utilizing literary elements taught commonly in English class.

When I was 14(2 years ago), I rapped in the same manner, using words of the same, maybe greater caliber thinking I was the best lyricist around. It's in the manipulation of the words and phrases though, not just of their meaning, that makes great lyricism.

Regardless, he is good for his age.

 

[sixslow]

so because hes 15 i'm supposed to appreciate his shitty music more?

 

[Ly.As.09]

I didn't hear any big words...I think for him being 15 is irrelevant and he's just good

 

[TROY]

I didn't hear any big words...

He didn't use big words, but based on the current American standard(set by other teens), his vocabulary displays a "gift"

 

[BBC]

nice cover!

 

[armint02]

i liked it!!!!