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http://straightfromthesideline.blogspot.com/2012/04/chicago-bulls-new-york-knicks-easter.html

let me know what you think. thanks for looking.
 

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any suggestions? i know that it was a little lengthy and came out more descriptive than i initially wanted it to be but let me know what i can improve on.
 

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Flood said:
any suggestions? i know that it was a little lengthy and came out more descriptive than i initially wanted it to be but let me know what i can improve on.
IT's pretty good, but in this day and age, you should probably get to the point in a more concise fashion.
 
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