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You try to flow to fast at certain points and then you throw it off. It makes sound mumbly and there's not much denunciation. Thats why im not to fond of this cause i hear it through out the track.

Try writing 2 bars with fast flows with the same amount of syllables that can be comfortable to flow on; not forcing syllables into the bar.

Out of all the stuff you heard the subject matter is very redundant. It get sold to hear the cliche subject matter of "i dont get noticed" and "bragdocio" tracks. Write more inspired work. In my opinon your delivery and flow has been going downhill since the first two tracks you did ( Jay z-Threats and Next Episode). Use those as guidelines too.

 

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TygaTyga said:
Sick Flow
thanks
Italian Stallion NY said:
You try to flow to fast at certain points and then you throw it off. It makes sound mumbly and there's not much denunciation. Thats why im not to fond of this cause i hear it through out the track.

Try writing 2 bars with fast flows with the same amount of syllables that can be comfortable to flow on; not forcing syllables into the bar.

Out of all the stuff you heard the subject matter is very redundant. It get sold to hear the cliche subject matter of "i dont get noticed" and "bragdocio" tracks. Write more inspired work. In my opinon your delivery and flow has been going downhill since the first two tracks you did ( Jay z-Threats and Next Episode). Use those as guidelines too.
will do IS, u kno i value ur opinion greatly
 

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Italian Stallion NY said:
You gotta alot potential bro and your hands down one of the best rappers in the area and if your work on some of the things i said youll be doing big things in no time.
thanks IS means a lot coming from u, i would never be where i am now if it wasnt for u
 
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