[louis tomlinson]

Made this a couple of weeks ago

https://soundcloud.com/tarexx%2Fs16

 

[Tyrrano]

cool percussion sounds
i would choose a different voice then the choir, or at least something else to accompany it
but fuck my opinion, as long as you dig it

 

[louis tomlinson]

cool percussion sounds
i would choose a different voice then the choir, or at least something else to accompany it
but fuck my opinion, as long as you dig it

thanks man, at first it was just the drums so i added the choir to spice it up

 

[Isco]

Its feels like its missing something. Its kinda plain. Just chords and drums. Drums are nice though.

 

[Tyrrano]

thanks man, at first it was just the drums so i added the choir to spice it up

the choir aint bad! its just not a strong enough voice to carry a beat for so long y'know?
Try adding like a bass line behind it, some piano accents, and a synth riff after the first 32 bars
just shit to keep the ears interested

 

[louis tomlinson]

Its feels like its missing something. Its kinda plain. Just chords and drums. Drums are nice though.

the choir aint bad! its just not a strong enough voice to carry a beat for so long y'know?
Try adding like a bass line behind it, some piano accents, and a synth riff after the first 32 bars
just shit to keep the ears interested

aights thanks mayne