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i don't think you're at the point were you need a portfolio site.
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i don't think you're at the point were you need a portfolio site. Hmm... I do agree.... the portfolio site is just something I'm doing so I can learn coding, plus this isn't all my work, most of my stuff is for www.living-in-vain.com and I have another big project I'm working on as well. However, I want to do some focus on photography as well because I enjoy it. Also, I'm doing loads of bapes for people which are pretty cool, deserve to be portfolio'd :p |
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Hmm... I do agree.... the portfolio site is just something I'm doing so I can learn coding, plus this isn't all my work, most of my stuff is for www.living-in-vain.com and I have another big project I'm working on as well.yeah i already saw all of that, didn't FMP make your logo? why is your logo pixelated? and honestly bro you're far from needing a portfolio site, if you want some criticism...most of your work is more like practice work, i haven't seen anything that is on the level of people of have port sites. you're stuff is really rough, your "bapes" are pixelated and jagged and obviously just photoshopped and pieced together, no negativity. Your light photos are random, it's very easy to replicate them, they also have no composition. most of your work feels like that of someone who just picked up photoshop and did a couple of tutorials. not trying to be a **** but when i read what you're trying to do i had to chime in because the work doesn't justify what you want. |
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yeah i already saw all of that, didn't FMP make your logo? why is your logo pixelated? and honestly bro you're far from needing a portfolio site, if you want some criticism...most of your work is more like practice work, i haven't seen anything that is on the level of people of have port sites. you're stuff is really rough, your "bapes" are pixelated and jagged and obviously just photoshopped and pieced together, no negativity. Your light photos are random, it's very easy to replicate them, they also have no composition. most of your work feels like that of someone who just picked up photoshop and did a couple of tutorials. not trying to be a **** but when i read what you're trying to do i had to chime in because the work doesn't justify what you want.
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wasn't even trying to but man.. |
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yeah i already saw all of that, didn't FMP make your logo? why is your logo pixelated? and honestly bro you're far from needing a portfolio site, if you want some criticism...most of your work is more like practice work, i haven't seen anything that is on the level of people of have port sites. you're stuff is really rough, your "bapes" are pixelated and jagged and obviously just photoshopped and pieced together, no negativity. Your light photos are random, it's very easy to replicate them, they also have no composition. most of your work feels like that of someone who just picked up photoshop and did a couple of tutorials. not trying to be a **** but when i read what you're trying to do i had to chime in because the work doesn't justify what you want. I totally get you. I'm not exactly a ****ing pro tho, I'm only 14.... give me a good couple 4 years and then you'll see what I can really do. Not trying to create compition but look at Casso, hes at college for design, I'm still 14 in high school.... I think for how old I am and how long I've been doing this stuff I'm doing quite well. :****gtfo: |
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wasn't even trying to but man.. eehh eehhh ehhh hold up. :****gtfo: 1. It was Atu's mistake on the logo by FMP :/ I wasn't aware of these forums or of this guy.... 2. I just checked your art thread and some **** is pretty cool.... however, 10 images of ****es with Zonbi behind them :****gtfo: insulting my stuff? justt shhh...... I get a lot of what your saying however I don't think your on the level to say "your stuff is ****" when your stuff isn't 100x better, plus I bet your an adult (just a guess) I don't want to be unreasonable but I think you were very harsh considering what you've shown. Also show me some light blurs you can do plsss..... |
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I totally get you. I'm not exactly a ****ing pro tho, I'm only 14.... give me a good couple 4 years and then you'll see what I can really do.first off Casso and I are both at Art colleges, 2nd if you can't take criticism then don't put your "work" on a public forum. I'm sure you're doing good for you but not nearly as well as you think you are. I started when I was 14 as well but i wouldn't want to plaster the internet with mediocre designs because then you'll be seen as that guy. 3rd if it's YOUR clothing company then you shouldn't have outsourced your logo design. |
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eehh eehhh ehhh hold up.hahah i only post stuff that i do for this forum. i have 7 years of experience. why would i post all my stuff on a kanye forum? oh so they're just pics of ****es? so you don't know about composition, color correction, photo retouching and editing techniques? also i didn't start my thread by saying i was the **** and wanting a portfolio site, i made the thread through constant req's for me to do things for people, oh and look at all the pages on my thread, i don't need to say i'm the ****. |
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first off Casso and I are both at Art colleges, 2nd if you can't take criticism then don't put your "work" on a public forum. I'm sure you're doing good for you but not nearly as well as you think you are. I started when I was 14 as well but i wouldn't want to plaster the internet with mediocre designs because then you'll be seen as that guy. 3rd if it's YOUR clothing company then you shouldn't have outsourced your logo design. I can take criticism I just think you were being a bit harsh, you stuff is cool, however I disagree that its bad to put out mediocre designs because if I can show some mediocre stuff then I get better over time it looks even better.... and it shows my improvment. Peace man, I'd love to learn from you, if you wanna give me some advice and tutorials on ways to do ****. Sfe man. |
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hahah i only post stuff that i do for this forum. i have 7 years of experience. why would i post all my stuff on a kanye forum? oh so they're just pics of ****es? so you don't know about composition, color correction, photo retouching and editing techniques? also i didn't start my thread by saying i was the **** and wanting a portfolio site, i made the thread through constant req's for me to do things for people, oh and look at all the pages on my thread, i don't need to say i'm the ****. lirl, a bit ****y eh. 1 thing tho, your in art college, I'm in a high school... I can improve a lot by the time I'm your age. I do know about photo retouching and colour correction actually :/ I wanna learn from people on this forum so gimme tutorials and good advice, but dont just hate. |
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I can take criticism I just think you were being a bit harsh, you stuff is cool, however I disagree that its bad to put out mediocre designs because if I can show some mediocre stuff then I get better over time it looks even better.... and it shows my improvment.i don't think i was being harsh at all. i made sure i stayed pretty neutral considering what i was analyzing. i don't think tutorials is the way to go, you should go buy a book or dl a pdf of one. and about the logo: you should have made it yourself or asked for the original because now you're stuck with a pixelated logo. |
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