Kanye To The: Kanye West

I was bored this brake so i decided to start writing raps. Never done it before

Pornographic poetry, A mind****ed orogy ,
Rapper by day , the mic rapist, you know its me
They thought in highschool i hit the pinnacle of my existance
Spend my days gambling on lottery tickets
Now i'm the Alphabet killer ,my  flow slicker,  making them bicker ,
Getting more head then Hotel Rawanda, zipped down my pants and whip out the  monsta
They tell me they don't remember why i didn't like ya. It's  Ca i remind you of a time when blacks was mastas


It's not that good but tell me what you think

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You said it's not that good...

You said it's not that good...

So are you agreeing with me

You said it's not that good...

Looobs

Dope 

So are you agreeing with me

I'm saying if you, the creator, don't find the material to be good... why would you think anyone else would? I'm holding my feedback, instead some advice; post something you're proud of before you seek critics.

how can you say i wrote this on brake

then turn into a dictionary writer
you didnt write

how can you say i wrote this on brake

then turn into a dictionary writer
you didnt write

how can you say i wrote this on brake

then turn into a dictionary writer
you didnt write

Yes i did write this. I usually freestyle to my self but i've never written anything down. This is my first written rap . I was wondering how it was to ya . But nobodys giving out advice or critics. Thats what years of the highest lvl of literature at your school does. I'm not so good with grammer but i have a big vocab. I wrote this this summer brake and posted it on a few forums. Ya have the been the least supportful in giving help

I'm saying if you, the creator, don't find the material to be good... why would you think anyone else would? I'm holding my feedback, instead some advice; post something you're proud of before you seek critics.

I feel that it started off really good but it puttered out to the end. I'm not satisfied till it's perfect and i just can't think off a way to finish it perfectly. It's missing a good punchline or something. I'm a perfectionist and kinda OCD with my raps. This is the first rap i've actually written down as i usually just freestyle to myself

First two lines and the lottery tickets line were good, in my opinion.

First line was wayy too Kanye (orogy? C'mon son) Find YOUR sound. I understand its ur first rap. Try listening to beats you hear on this website and write to those, that'll help give you your own flow tbh

First line was wayy too Kanye (orogy? C'mon son) Find YOUR sound. I understand its ur first rap. Try listening to beats you hear on this website and write to those, that'll help give you your own flow tbh

I've been saying the world orogy forever i thought that was an actual word.

I've been saying the world orogy forever i thought that was an actual word.

Orgy is the word I think you're looking for. But good luck if you pursue rap more

Orgy is the word I think you're looking for. But good luck if you pursue rap more

Na i was just bored. First time i heard it was from kanye tbh and i thought thats how it was suppose to be

Na i was just bored. First time i heard it was from kanye tbh and i thought thats how it was suppose to be

Haha nah he makes up words all the time because sometimes the english language is limiting (if that's possible)